Thursday, December 10, 2009

A time my world changed v2

That boy has me!!!

I went through many to realize.
What is this..? should I say it because he did?
I use to say it without even knowing
but I came across one with knowing.
Is this really that four letter word?
I use to compare love … to my past lust… never knowing..
How love really felt.
Until I came across one.
One I can argue with and completely forget what I’m arguing for.
One who has the best comfort. One who I can be mad at… but by one touch be the happiest woman In the world.… one who can change my madness into calmness
When I’m feeling down… nothing but you…knows a way to uplift me.
his words of wisdom actually help and don't sound like your parents annoying you.
Until now, do I know what love means.
What it means to say “I love you”
Only towards him I feel proud of saying this.
Only to him do I have no doubts for saying that.
but not saying i dont have those days when i get tired of arguing with him.
in the end it makes our relaionship 2 times better.
The past was nonsense…
The now is realization…
The true feeling…
The real meaning…
Of a real true love…
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4 comments:

  1. Megan SharpDecember 10, 2009 at 7:04 AM

    Awww. I like nice happy poems.

    Anyway. This is a fun topic to work with so I would then try to show rather than just tell. You say he knows a way to uplift you. But you could describe how he uplifts you for a more interesting moment. And play up the senses taste touch see hear smell. Theres a lot of ways to describe your feelings for a boy so try to make it really personal to the one you are talking about. Show that he is this uniquely different person from all the rest.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 10, 2009 at 7:05 AM

    dangg i really liked this.
    i dont see changes that need to be made you got it right on the dot. its very very good. but if ithink of somthing else i will tell you. but keep it the way it is.

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  3. ZoeyDecember 10, 2009 at 7:06 AM

    Awe I remember when I felt this way. It was the best feeling ever. Its something that you'll never forget. This poem touched me.

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  4. PanhiaDecember 10, 2009 at 7:07 AM

    this is a really nice loving poem, but you could try showing us rather then telling us so we can try to picture something.

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